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Kobocha's Manga

Hey everybody! I found an oooooooold DBZ fanfic starring my friends and me I started back in High School. I made it to the last page in the chapter, but I left some squares blank so it's still not finished. I am seriously considering finishing it and starting a new chapter in the series. I want to post it here to let you guys see it. The art isn't very good cause it's like 8 years old...(wow, that's a long time for me to keep interest in something) so if you want to input a critique, I already know that. But I want to share it with you all. Here's the first few pages: No title-sorry
Kobocha

Oh, btw: It contains some mild lauguage. It was one of those phases I went through when I was like 17 or so and couldn't talk like that. So I thought it was "extreme" to include it in the dialogue. Tee-hee. Hope you can read my handwriting. If not I'll try to fix it. Hope ya' like it.







Admin_Hai

I just found this! I can't belive I didn't see the title earlier, Kobocha! *slaps head* It looks good. But it reminds me alot of the series. Just with you in it lol. -sweatdrop-.Its kinda hard to critisize if you probally already know what we are going to critisize about, because it it 8 years old of drawings. But I think back then, you should've practiced working with more shapes in the boxes and speech bubbles.
Kobocha

MY FIRST COMMENT?! ((((GLOMPs Hai)))) Thanks for the compliment!

It's supposed to be like the series, but with me in it LOL (kinda like a Lion King 1 1/2 themed thing only THEY copied from me XD ) I just mainly wanted to share it so you don't have to critisize it if you don't want to. I was just saying that I know the drawings aren't the best. Yeah the panels and wording are terrible, but I didn't have the luxery of a PC or a scanner or anything digital when I drew it (nor did I think I would EVER find another group of people, other than close friends, that would actually add fuel to my fire). All I had was my pencils, a ruler and a dream *sparkly eyes* @_@ I'm already pretty set on making the next chapter when I can get this one finished and I'm confident enough to say, with taking your advise, now I know what not to do. Some pages have blank squares and some pages are completly blank. But I should have those drawn and inked soon. I guess what I meant by "What do you think" was as far as the story, but I had hoped to have more up by now because it's not enough to get an opinion. The story does change I promise but this first chapter is pretty much copied to familiarize the reader with the story and remind them of what happens in this part of the story.
Guess I should have explained that better in the first post. woopsie!
But thank you thank you thank you for looking at it and giving me your feedback. Wow! I typed a lot. You probably glanced at this thinking "omg I made her rant!" No, no. LOL I just wanted to explain myself better.
FoxFire

You know. I actually looked at this sometime when you first posted it but I can't remember this one. No surprise though since you drew like a million different comics in high school. >^_^<
Kobocha

True true
I did a LOT of stuff instead of my school work >^_^<
FoxFire

Didn't we all. Lol
Roy Allen had the best class for just zoning out and drawing.
Admin_Hai

lol! I DID make you rant! xD Oh well. I tend to do that too when we are talking about crtism and art. And you're welcome, Kobocha. I only wished I had noticed this sooner. -sweatdrop-
I have seen alot of your drawings, but I think this is a first of me seeing your comics. Draw some more manga, please. *puppy eyes*
FoxFire

Hai: She doesn't have to draw more. She's got tons. >^_^<
Kobocha

It is true, I do have an endless mountain of comics and doodles, but yes, I will post more of this manga as I get it done. Thanks for the support. (((hugs))) And no, I didn't mean to come off as ranting, because it didn't make me angry. I welcome other ideas and opinions. I was merely explaining my situation. *ack* >^_^<
Admin_Hai

Come on now, Kobocha! You said you were gonna post some of the other pages that you did!! I wanna seeee kyu!!! I WANNA SEEE KYU!!! >_<
Kobocha

I'll do it this week I promise! Seeing as I slept aaaaaalllllllll day Friday up until it was time to come home, I didn't have time. :q53:
Tetraforce

oohh i think it would be cool to see your manga! xD
Admin_Hai

Kobocha wrote:
I'll do it this week I promise! Seeing as I slept aaaaaalllllllll day Friday up until it was time to come home, I didn't have time. :q53:

LOL! Thats really ironic seeing that I slept ALLL day Friday too! xD
Kobocha

Thanks BakaOrange and yes it is, Hai. I think I'll just keep editing my original post so as not to confuzzle people when they read. >^_^<
Admin_Hai

Alrighty then. ^_^ But do a 'UPDATE' Reply like I tend to do so then we get reminded okies? xD
Kobocha

O-TAY
Tetraforce

for some reason i stink at making manga or comics,.......i guess i either get tiered of drawing or i just cant draw it out to make sence.......*sigh*
OHH WELL!!
Kobocha

I do that! I actually started ANOTHER comic. *gigglesnort*
It's on its 8th page and it's gonna be a looooooooooooong one. I've been working on it everday for the past week and a half but only because my friend MIKE JONES keeps pestering me.

He such a douche'
Admin_Hai

Well, I think one way that keeps some manga artists going with their comics is the constant fanletters and critiques of fans and other people that read their first chapter or issue.
Kobocha

True! I didn't get the response I had hoped for on this manga and haven't worked on it anymore. But Mike and some of my friends on DA are really excited about this new project and have been asking me about it so I've worked on it nonstop. I'm on page 9 now! >^_^<
Tetraforce


ok....so thats how they(sorry, i haven't posted any of theese i a while!)
Kobocha

*gigglesnort*
Cro

Not bad... It's not over 9,000 thou.
Kobocha

No, it's not. And probably never will be.........ever! One of those projects that's all wrapped up in my mind, but can never seem to get it down on paper. Fanfic is so much easier.........too bad I'm horrible with words.


wait a....................CRO! *SQUEEEEEEEEEE*


(I really need to get back on here more)
Cro

You will draw me and you will like it!!!!

*Beats Vegeta
*Kills Nappa
*Fucks Kobocha

all in a days work.

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